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This Visual novel is really...particular, I am not even sure if I should give a review since it's a really early beta and it won't be fair to judge based on this...but I will do it anyway.

First of, the opening animation and music are 10/10, specially for a VN it really sets a tone of high quality for the experience.

The art and music of the game are nice, even if I personally don't enjoy the art style of character portraits that much; the animated "!" and movement really bring things to life.

The only thing I personally didn't enjoy that much, and I'd like to make emphasis on personally, was the general "edgy", depression plot of the story, is something really serious and hard to handle, and it may be because the game it's on early development but, feels very weird, specially when it tries to get meta..

It also feels like something I have seen a few times before, which is not something bad but, it definitely skews my view on this when I have seen it executed better AND worse before.

I think I didn't properly expressed myself in the video review because of my lack of time, but I think although my reasons for not liking this game are mostly due to personal taste, I feel there is truly a few things plot and character wise that can be improved.

I noticed a few winks here and there in the game and in the introduction video that signal to a much more deeper interesting lore, and I am sure the game is going to turn great and in time even change my opinion, please don't feel discouraged, that's not my intention at all with this review.

This game has really high production quality and I can see some serious talent behind it, Keep the good work!

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Thank you for the constructive criticism! You do make some good points regarding the general edginess of it, so I suppose I'll have to work on that. (also sorry it took me a while to respond, I wanted to watch your video first but couldn't find the time until now)

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Ohhh, Its interesting ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ I like the concept of the game and how the plot goes